New REEL

[justinbrown]

Hi Was wondering if you'd have a look at my ruff cut reel and let me know what you think works, doesnt work, shots that should be taken out and if the music works.

Im looking at cutting about 10 seconds out of the reel

 

http://www.vimeo.com/7793117

 

Thanks in advance

 

Justin

[Edgar Dubrovskiy]

Interesting. Very specific tone.

 

Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot!

And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special.

 

The rest is really nice. Slow, natural.

[Nicholas A Micros]

Interesting. Very specific tone.

 

Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot!

And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special.

 

The rest is really nice. Slow, natural.

 

Exactly.

 

Great job Edgar, beautiful footage!

[Ram Shani]

i love the first shot and i think it should be your opening with the titel of your name on it(insted of the black)

 

other then that good work:)

[Edgar Dubrovskiy]

Exactly.

 

Great job Edgar, beautiful footage!

 

 

ehrm...

It's Justin's showreel :)

[justinbrown]

Hey,

 

Thanks for your comments, i had a lot of comments from all different people, a lot of directors were saying i needed more lit work, thats something i cant add, so will have to work upon that. Also had a lot of conflicting comments so had to go with my guy instinct on the final cut.

Its finished now so thanks,

http://www.vimeo.com/7793117

 

Justin