justinbrown Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 Hi Was wondering if you'd have a look at my ruff cut reel and let me know what you think works, doesnt work, shots that should be taken out and if the music works. Im looking at cutting about 10 seconds out of the reel http://www.vimeo.com/7793117 Thanks in advance Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edgar Dubrovskiy Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 Interesting. Very specific tone. Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot! And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special. The rest is really nice. Slow, natural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicholas A Micros Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Interesting. Very specific tone. Cut the fist shot - it doesn't show anything, really. Put something very strong - it's the first shot! And then there are two shots after the 'flare' shot (00:30). Also nothing special. The rest is really nice. Slow, natural. Exactly. Great job Edgar, beautiful footage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ram Shani Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 i love the first shot and i think it should be your opening with the titel of your name on it(insted of the black) other then that good work:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edgar Dubrovskiy Posted December 13, 2009 Share Posted December 13, 2009 Exactly. Great job Edgar, beautiful footage! ehrm... It's Justin's showreel :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justinbrown Posted December 13, 2009 Author Share Posted December 13, 2009 Hey, Thanks for your comments, i had a lot of comments from all different people, a lot of directors were saying i needed more lit work, thats something i cant add, so will have to work upon that. Also had a lot of conflicting comments so had to go with my guy instinct on the final cut. Its finished now so thanks, http://www.vimeo.com/7793117 Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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