Episode 2 of My Web series

Young Pizzy · February 12, 2016

Hello guys

Please do watch the second episode of my Web series "Diary Of Porsha"

JD Hartman · February 13, 2016

http://www.cinematography.com/index.php?showtopic=69799&hl=

If she died at the end of Ep1, is this her twin?

Don't like the laugh track or the jittery panning either.

Young Pizzy · February 15, 2016

She fainted, she didn't die

JD Hartman · February 15, 2016

She fainted, she didn't die

Really?

In reply to Freya's post, you posted, "

Posted 28 December 2015 - 01:28 PM

Thanks Freya

I'm glad you like it... To answer a few of your questions.

Yes, she died at the end."

Young Pizzy · February 16, 2016

Oops! Dat was a mistake, she just passed out... she didn't die!

Jan Tore Soerensen · February 16, 2016

I'm gonna try to give you some constructive criticism here.

The camera shakes way to much for a piece like this. It should be on a gimbal or steadycam. The sound was a bit weird, and the laughter just didn't fit in at all. If you are going with laughter, at least it has to sound good. It can't cut like that.

I like the location, but I feel like you could have utilized it more.

Young Pizzy · February 16, 2016

Thanks for criticism Jan, will work more and improve on your points

Wiliam Cardoza · February 17, 2016

I actually like the incongruent laugh track :) but i.m.h.o. it takes so long to get there setting things up with the tilt down and pan and him deciding to go talk to her.

When he says "hello, hi" at around 00:53 i.m.h.o. is when it starts to get interesting :)

I can't wait to see the next one!