Hi, It looks ok, my advice might seem a little shallow, but I would recommend using a different song. Something without words... Yeh, I know, I said it would sound shallow...
Bergmann said, "Film has a rhythm, like music, so why add music to music"?
then again, Martin Scorsese, always suprises us with his choices of music, so what the hell do I know...
Just reconcider the music, that's all I'm saying....
Good Luck!