Antoinette "Back And Forth"
Great beauty look of the clip , lighting, nice skin tones! blown out highlights look good. Excellent!
Some Critique
Editing could've been better, lots of similar shots cut together, mid to mid,etc. Some diversity could help. Camera zoom throws me off a little. Better variety of shots, still some similarity in editing.
Crossing of the line, maybe, if you've had the guy looking at the girl from the other side of the fence.
Overall very good job!
On a second video,
Great concept! Good delivery!
Critique
Wide shot of a dancing TV girl become a little boring after a while. (wanted to switch to another music channel :) A guy with TV comes a little too late. Again, little variety, different focal length
would be great.
Please take my critique as an improvement suggestion and pure IMHO.