Very well done. I had to compare the phone shot over and over because I thought you used the original haha. To give you input, I must say that you lack a bit more dynamic in the shots. There's a higher contrast ratio in the original. The first shot needs a coculoris and the pattern to land on both the actor and the wall behind. The lamp should have been hotter, maybe a 60w or 80w bulb. The phone shot was perfect IMO. The original can though, has a silver rim at the middle of the frame that gives it a nice highlight. In summary, higher contrast!
p.s. Check out my short posted below yours. ;) Would love your feedback.