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So it's been a long time coming for me. I finally got my reel edited. I'd love to hear some feed back. I'll be adding a few more things i shot that are still in post production but I want to keep its length at 3:30ish... Let me know what you think, I really appreciate it.

 

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Posted

I think you defiantly have a clear style.

 

I would cut it down to 1:30-2:00.

 

Nice work so far!

 

Jeremy,

 

Thanks for your feed back. I'll cut it down some, I agree it's a bit long. I'm curious what you see as my style, I very much in the frame of mind of augmenting natural light. Delicately and deliberately or not at all. I study a ton of Gordon Willis, Conrad Hall, and Roger Deakins.

 

Cheers,

 

Davi Silveira

www.davi-silveira.com

  • 2 months later...
Posted

Alright, I followed your advice. The Trailer has now been cut to two minutes. It's my 'Narrative' cut.

 

 

Let me know if you have any more thoughts. Thanks

Posted

Well done Davi!

 

There's a lot of very strong stuff here. But a little bit that's not so special. You know which shots I'm talking about I'm sure. Cut them out. We won't miss them and you'll leave a better impression. Just my gut reaction :)

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Well done Davi!

 

There's a lot of very strong stuff here. But a little bit that's not so special. You know which shots I'm talking about I'm sure. Cut them out. We won't miss them and you'll leave a better impression. Just my gut reaction :)

 

Bruce!!

 

Wow, good to hear from you, It's been a long time! Thank you for the critique, I'll switch those clips out for sure. I have some better stuff I can replace them with as well. I always enjoyed reading your updates while you filmed in Russia! :) I never told you this but I learned a lot from you, even though we only briefly worked together on that short in LA with Vanessa.

 

Cheers,

 

Davi

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Posted

Bruce, here it is. I actually changed it quite a bit. Let me know your thoughts, I decided to keep this reel for my Narrative work only and keep it as short as possible.

 

Thanks for your feed back man.

 

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Bruce!!

 

Wow, good to hear from you, It's been a long time! Thank you for the critique, I'll switch those clips out for sure. I have some better stuff I can replace them with as well. I always enjoyed reading your updates while you filmed in Russia! :) I never told you this but I learned a lot from you, even though we only briefly worked together on that short in LA with Vanessa.

 

Cheers,

 

Davi

Thanks Davi for the kind words. Just saw this now almost a year later :)

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