David Edward Keen Posted April 20, 2017 Share Posted April 20, 2017 Not sure if there's a place in this forum for this but lemee know if not then where's a good forum: When writing my screenplay for the short, non-dialogue directions of camera are recorded on paper how? All the things, many there are, that are shown, the montage sequences etc....is the shotlist where you would start recording the ideas? Or would you write it into a script as you might with stage directions? There are lots of these events in my short, and I'm learning how best to go about it. I could just take a shotlist template and just start writing there, revising as i go but is that how people generally do it? Anyone start out writing it in prose style? cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timothy Sewell Posted April 20, 2017 Share Posted April 20, 2017 It's a long time since I wrote a screenplay - and that was in the UK - but I was told that I shouldn't add camera movements per se (unless absolutely crucial to the story) as that was the province of the director/DoP. Obviously things may be different now/in the US industry and if you are also the director I expect it's entirely up to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member Aapo Lettinen Posted April 20, 2017 Premium Member Share Posted April 20, 2017 if you are a filmmaker doing both the writing+directing and also the DoP's work, then it might work if you directly write down the camera directions without writing the script first. otherwise, I'd recommend just doing a standard script first and then translating it to images and camera movement. the main benefit is that it is much easier for others to understand the story you are trying to tell and also it is much easier for both you and them to see if there is any story/motivation related problems in the script which need to be corrected. if starting directly from the camera movements you will forget the story for most part and the film may turn out havin OK looking single shots but it will most likely have incoherent story and lots of problems with character development and motivating their actions. it is also very difficult for others to follow what you are planning and if there is any better approach for things if you confuse the script with camera and lighting instructions etc (which will change anyway when the film is actually being made so are also kind of irrelevant to plant at the early stage) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Edward Keen Posted April 20, 2017 Author Share Posted April 20, 2017 thanks guys it's a teensy tiny production. there's no need to communicate the ideas to another, so I'll probably write it out in prose, then go to a storyboard, which i was thinking of having a friend rough thru with still shots since i draw like pooka. Then shot list. It's more for the organization and discipline so I'm not sitting there thinking 'maybe let's try this' on the set. That's not gonna work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 20, 2017 Share Posted April 20, 2017 Anything really strong in a film could be usefully included in the screenplay. I immediately thought of the Fancher/Peoples Bladerunner script, which to be fair, was written with a lot of collaboration with a director who is a brilliant visualizer. Take a look at the first page or two http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/blade-runner_shooting.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Edward Keen Posted April 22, 2017 Author Share Posted April 22, 2017 Gregg---that is absolutely tremendous. Thanks a lot for the reference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 The drawing thing is very powerful. Famous pencil artist Escher said that anyone could learn to draw. The kind of sketches that will be useful visualizations often look like scribble, but may express an idea or feeling or a sense of relationship or a geometry relating objects or a sense of the perspective, the lens. See if you can find some pages by Eisenstein developing his ideas. Expressive prose and expressive sketches..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member George Ebersole Posted April 23, 2017 Premium Member Share Posted April 23, 2017 You don't put down camera directions in a script unless you plan on directing or shooting it yourself, or the shoot is germane to the story. That is to say if you need close ups to further the narrative as part of the story structure, then you put down things like "CLOSE SHOT". Otherwise, like I said, you don't put down camera directions. That's about all I'll say. I did spend a good chunk of change to learn the craft. If you're really wanting an online screenwriting resource, then cruise over to www.zoetrope.com It's Francis Ford Coppola's website. He sells both his wine and movies there, but also hopes a very lively and active forum / BBS where they talk nothing but screenplays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 I'm hoping David might find something inspiring in the work of exceptional people. I would not want to be steering him towards the normal or the formulaic. As he says in the first post, he's writing towards his own film. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 To be clear, I'm not calling Coppola normal or formulaic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member George Ebersole Posted April 27, 2017 Premium Member Share Posted April 27, 2017 I'm hoping David might find something inspiring in the work of exceptional people. I would not want to be steering him towards the normal or the formulaic. As he says in the first post, he's writing towards his own film. I've read a few bad screenplays at Zoetrope.com, but most of the stuff there is (or was) posted by seasoned professionals. As for formulaic ... well, define formulaic. Most films are about the guy getting the girl and/or beating the bad guy. Ever since Amazon studios opened its doors for business activity on Zoetrope has dropped off a lot, but I think traffic has picked up some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 27, 2017 Share Posted April 27, 2017 George. Read David carefully. Ask for any needed clarification, and give him the most useful advice that you can. Sounds fun. You quote me, but sound as though you don't read me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregg MacPherson Posted April 27, 2017 Share Posted April 27, 2017 David, See if you can find the book Eisenstein at Work: Jay Leyda, Zina Voynow, Ted Perry..... Hopefully it's in the film school library...It gives a very direct sense of how Eisenstein commenced his realization with words and sketches..Let us know what you think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member George Ebersole Posted April 27, 2017 Premium Member Share Posted April 27, 2017 George. Read David carefully. Ask for any needed clarification, and give him the most useful advice that you can. Sounds fun. You quote me, but sound as though you don't read me. I did. I'm not sure what you're getting at. *EDIT* I re-read the thread, and I still don't see a problem here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Edward Keen Posted May 10, 2017 Author Share Posted May 10, 2017 Thanks all...helps a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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