C Kenneybrew Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 (edited) Hey all, I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on. Thanks Edited March 15, 2013 by C Kenneybrew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Kennedy Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 don't start every cut with quick rack focus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Drysdale Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 (edited) Hey all, I directed this ad for a doritos competition (obviously I didnt win) but I would like to know what you think of the quality of the shots and camera, style, etc. And any other advice I could improve on. Thanks There is a section for critiquing work, this area is for general discussion. It helps in keeping things tidy. Also, you do need to use your full name, it's one of the forum rules. Edited March 15, 2013 by Brian Drysdale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Drysdale Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 Nor should you double post, since you already had the video in the correct section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevith Mitchell Posted March 17, 2013 Share Posted March 17, 2013 The only thing I see wrong is the not the shots, but the content. Its too vague, which adds confusion and the humor is lost. Is the guy suppose to be an animal? : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Rencher Posted March 17, 2013 Share Posted March 17, 2013 The lighting is very flat. The focus was off in a couple of shots. I think that the composition could have been more creative. Some of the colors are supersaturated to the point that they clip, and the overall look is very "video". Having said all that, I'm sure you learned a lot from this, and next year's submission will probably be amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C Kenneybrew Posted July 4, 2013 Author Share Posted July 4, 2013 Thank you all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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