Max Hall Posted February 12, 2021 Share Posted February 12, 2021 I'd love some feedback on this cut of my new short. It's about a young man who tries to kill an annoying cat on his property. Let me know what you think! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sustaining Member Tyler Purcell Posted February 12, 2021 Sustaining Member Share Posted February 12, 2021 Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Hall Posted February 13, 2021 Author Share Posted February 13, 2021 18 hours ago, Tyler Purcell said: Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. Thanks for the feedback. Agreed about the lighting. I was disappointed about that in that scene. Glad to hear you thought it worked! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joel Andersson Posted April 4, 2021 Share Posted April 4, 2021 I love the idea and the ending was great haha! What did you think was the hardest part about making the film, and would you like to change anything now when its done? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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