Max Hall Share Posted February 12 I'd love some feedback on this cut of my new short. It's about a young man who tries to kill an annoying cat on his property. Let me know what you think! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Tyler Purcell Sustaining Member Share Posted February 12 Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Max Hall Author Share Posted February 13 18 hours ago, Tyler Purcell said: Yea it worked, tho IDK about killing the cat. Looked good. The only thing I would have done differently cinematography wise is probably that light on the black woman. I would have balanced everything in that scene for daylight and let the shadows happen more naturally. It was the only part that took me out of the story. Otherwise, it worked well. Thanks for the feedback. Agreed about the lighting. I was disappointed about that in that scene. Glad to hear you thought it worked! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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