Mark Williams Posted April 21, 2017 Share Posted April 21, 2017 This is my concept trailer for a proposed new film that has UK government HMRC SEIS approval This means up to 70% of investment in tax relief. The film will be set at an American airbase in the UK. I'm also looking for investors. www.vimeo.com/214146101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premium Member Aapo Lettinen Posted April 21, 2017 Premium Member Share Posted April 21, 2017 I would change some of shots which have cinematography issues (or if not possible, reframe them) , add more closeups and maybe drop some airplane shots. I would've loved to see more alien shots. I know it's a concept trailer but it might sell better this way :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark Williams Posted April 21, 2017 Author Share Posted April 21, 2017 Thanks aapo :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rob spence Posted April 21, 2017 Share Posted April 21, 2017 I think the explosions and gun flashes are a little heavy handed ie look too 'video'...you could probably tone them down a bit. I think you could easily tone down a few of the other CGi bits too to improve them...a bit more edge blur? Nice concept trailer though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark Williams Posted April 21, 2017 Author Share Posted April 21, 2017 Thanks Rob :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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