Looking for constructive criticism

[Wilson Graham Skinner]

Below is a link to stills from a recent film I worked on as DP.

The film is a comedic coming-of-age type film

It was shot on the Arri Alexa with Zeiss CP.2 lenses.

Primarily lit with Skypanel S60s and Arrisun 1.2k HMI

Let me know what you think!

https://imgur.com/a/6sAQyL3

Edited July 19, 2021 by Wilson Graham Skinner

[Daniel D. Teoli Jr.]

Looks good to me. I thought the backpacks were distracting, but they give context. Maybe boy in #5 could be improved on with color balance a little.

Send in some clips, but I don't think you need much criticism.

Edited July 19, 2021 by Daniel D. Teoli Jr.

[Davi Silveira]

Hey, 

 

Just a thought, I felt like you had really strong compositions and lighting felt very natural... The only shot I didn't like was the boy outside. The second to last picture. I don't know but it felt flat and had no style to me, specially compared to the other ones. I agree with Daniel (above) on the color too. 

[Christopher D. Arrington]

The lighting feels perfectly balanced to me.